Kamen Rider Sting: A Second Chance.

mbozzo · 09/11/09, 11:43 PM

The time is January 1983. The city is Los Angeles. An alien mothership is hovering over it. Suddenly, a mirror like opening appeared in the sky, and a lone brown haired male came out of it. He landed on the ground and began to cough. He tried to get up, but his coughing got the best of him. Then, two male wearing a red uniform, with a black vest, boots, and gloves came toward him. They looked down at the coughing man and were worried about him. He didn't look like a threat. "We better get him to a doctor," said the first man. They lifted him by his arms. "We are going to get you to a doctor," said the second man. He couldn't say anything, so he let them take him to a hopital. Once they were inside the building, a male doctor named Fred came toward them. "Is something wrong with your friend?" asked Fred, who was a dark haired male. "We just met him. We believe that he is sick," said the first man. Fred took the sick man by his arm and took him to his office. He layed the sick man on the table. Then, he saw it. The calander said January 1983. He couldn't believe what he has seen. If that calander is right, he has travel back in time to the year 1983. To be continued.

mbozzo · 09/12/09, 10:46 PM

Chris looked at the doctor treating him. "Are you all right?" said The doctor. "Do I look all right?" asked Chris, coughing up a storm. "No, you have a very bad disease. I don't think we have a cure for your disease," answered Fred. Then, a blonde female wearing a red uniform came into Fred's office. "Is this the guy brought into this building by two of our shocktroopers?" said the blonde. "Yes, he is, but I don't have the cure for his sickness," admitted Fred. She turned to Fred and said,"you may not have the cure, but my people do." Then, she took out a tan stick from her pocket and pressed it on his neck. Chris suddenly stopped coughing. He looked at the blonde female. "Thank you. I thought I'll never be cured," said Chris. "You are welcome. My name is Beth," said the blonde. She gave out her hand. Chris touched it. Then, she got a vision of Chris's life. She let go of it, and put her hands on Fred's examing table. She didn't look right. "Are you all right?" asked a worried Chris. She felt dissy for a while. Then, she got up and let go of the table. She gave Chris a frightening look. "You do not belong here. You must return to where you came from, Kamen Rider Sting," said Beth. To be continued.

PrimoPiccolo · 09/14/09, 07:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mbozzo

dissy

Dizzy.

TokuNoob · 09/18/09, 09:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PrimoPiccolo

Dizzy.

Of all the errors present, why focus on that one? Just enjoy the story for a change.

mbozzo · 09/19/09, 07:58 PM

Fred couldn't understand what was happening here. He doesn't know why Beth, who's a female Visitor doctor, suddenly became afraid of Chris. "Go back to your version of the planet Earth, human," said Beth. "I can't. I don't know how I ended up here," protested Chris. Beth sensed that Chris was telling the truth. For the first time in her life, Beth wish that her father wasn't a preast of Zon. Fred hasn't seen Beth act like a paniced girl before. "You better get out of here," warned Fred. Chris knew better than to stay where he wasn't welcome. He walked out of the office. and into the halls. Soon, he was outside. He looked up and saw the mothership hovering over Los Angeles. There shouldn't be an alien mothership here on Earth in the year 1983. He remembered being send to the advent viod. Then, he remembered meeting his Venturian twin there. The two of them became good friends. Then there was a flash of light and he was back on Earth. Suddenly 5 shocktroopers came toward him. "Stop, right there. We were warned that a dangerous human has came out of the hospital," said the head shocktrooper. Then, Beth came out of the hospital. "This human is a threat to our mission here. He must be captured," said Beth. The 5 shocktrooper aim their lasers at him. Chris knew that he have no choice, but go with them. To be continued.

mbozzo · 09/20/09, 10:54 PM

Chhris didn't fight as the 5 shocktroopers took him to a waiting shuttle. He didn't talk as the shuttle went into the sky heading toward the Los Angeles mothership. Since Chris didn't have his advent deck, he felt there is nothing that he could do about it. Soon, the shuttle went into the landing bay of the mothership. Chris and the 5 shocktroopers got out of the shuttle. A dark haired male came toward them. He stopped near them. So, this is the threat to our mission here. He doess not look like it," said the dark haired male, who is named Steven. Steven look over Chris. He wasn't impressed by Chris. Then, Chris saw a robotic sting ray in the window. It was colored dark red and black. Then, it came out of the window and into the landing bay. The 6 aliens heard a sound and turned their head to see where it came from. They ended up wishing that they didn't as the robotic sting ray started to attack them. They fell down from the attack, being knocked out by it. It hovered over Chris. Then, Chris heard a voice said "Trust me. I must strike you with my tail to give you your powers." Chris decided to trust the voice and allow the robotic sting ray to strike him with its tail. As it did, Chris felt power flowing into him. Then he send his right hand out and said, "Tranform." At that moment, a white light covered Chris, and the dark red and black armor of Kamen Rider Sting appear on him. Chris couldn't believe what has happen to him. He was Kamen Rider Sting, again. "I know you have questions, but it have to wait. More shocktroopers have arrived," warned the robotic sting ray. To be continued.

HenshinSlayer · 10/15/09, 10:23 PM

Kamen rider sting didn't exist on 1983? Sorry, I don't understand your story of the rider.

mbozzo · 10/18/09, 01:03 PM

I don't know if there was a Kamen Rider Sting in Ventura during the year 1983, but there wasn't any Kamen Rider on the Earth that Chris was droped off. Chris and his advent beast was removed from the advent viod by a telepathic cry for help from the Starchild. Chris wasn't the only one who heard that cry for help thoughout hypertime. He was just the first to arrive.

09/11/09, 11:43 PM	#1
mbozzo Power Ranger Join Date: 08/15/09 Posts: 876	Kamen Rider Sting: A Second Chance. The time is January 1983. The city is Los Angeles. An alien mothership is hovering over it. Suddenly, a mirror like opening appeared in the sky, and a lone brown haired male came out of it. He landed on the ground and began to cough. He tried to get up, but his coughing got the best of him. Then, two male wearing a red uniform, with a black vest, boots, and gloves came toward him. They looked down at the coughing man and were worried about him. He didn't look like a threat. "We better get him to a doctor," said the first man. They lifted him by his arms. "We are going to get you to a doctor," said the second man. He couldn't say anything, so he let them take him to a hopital. Once they were inside the building, a male doctor named Fred came toward them. "Is something wrong with your friend?" asked Fred, who was a dark haired male. "We just met him. We believe that he is sick," said the first man. Fred took the sick man by his arm and took him to his office. He layed the sick man on the table. Then, he saw it. The calander said January 1983. He couldn't believe what he has seen. If that calander is right, he has travel back in time to the year 1983. To be continued. Last edited by mbozzo; 09/19/09 at 08:08 PM.

09/12/09, 10:46 PM	#2
mbozzo Power Ranger Join Date: 08/15/09 Posts: 876	Part 2 Chris looked at the doctor treating him. "Are you all right?" said The doctor. "Do I look all right?" asked Chris, coughing up a storm. "No, you have a very bad disease. I don't think we have a cure for your disease," answered Fred. Then, a blonde female wearing a red uniform came into Fred's office. "Is this the guy brought into this building by two of our shocktroopers?" said the blonde. "Yes, he is, but I don't have the cure for his sickness," admitted Fred. She turned to Fred and said,"you may not have the cure, but my people do." Then, she took out a tan stick from her pocket and pressed it on his neck. Chris suddenly stopped coughing. He looked at the blonde female. "Thank you. I thought I'll never be cured," said Chris. "You are welcome. My name is Beth," said the blonde. She gave out her hand. Chris touched it. Then, she got a vision of Chris's life. She let go of it, and put her hands on Fred's examing table. She didn't look right. "Are you all right?" asked a worried Chris. She felt dissy for a while. Then, she got up and let go of the table. She gave Chris a frightening look. "You do not belong here. You must return to where you came from, Kamen Rider Sting," said Beth. To be continued.

09/19/09, 07:58 PM	#5
mbozzo Power Ranger Join Date: 08/15/09 Posts: 876	Part 3 Fred couldn't understand what was happening here. He doesn't know why Beth, who's a female Visitor doctor, suddenly became afraid of Chris. "Go back to your version of the planet Earth, human," said Beth. "I can't. I don't know how I ended up here," protested Chris. Beth sensed that Chris was telling the truth. For the first time in her life, Beth wish that her father wasn't a preast of Zon. Fred hasn't seen Beth act like a paniced girl before. "You better get out of here," warned Fred. Chris knew better than to stay where he wasn't welcome. He walked out of the office. and into the halls. Soon, he was outside. He looked up and saw the mothership hovering over Los Angeles. There shouldn't be an alien mothership here on Earth in the year 1983. He remembered being send to the advent viod. Then, he remembered meeting his Venturian twin there. The two of them became good friends. Then there was a flash of light and he was back on Earth. Suddenly 5 shocktroopers came toward him. "Stop, right there. We were warned that a dangerous human has came out of the hospital," said the head shocktrooper. Then, Beth came out of the hospital. "This human is a threat to our mission here. He must be captured," said Beth. The 5 shocktrooper aim their lasers at him. Chris knew that he have no choice, but go with them. To be continued. Last edited by mbozzo; 10/04/09 at 09:52 PM.

09/20/09, 10:54 PM	#6
mbozzo Power Ranger Join Date: 08/15/09 Posts: 876	Part 4 Chhris didn't fight as the 5 shocktroopers took him to a waiting shuttle. He didn't talk as the shuttle went into the sky heading toward the Los Angeles mothership. Since Chris didn't have his advent deck, he felt there is nothing that he could do about it. Soon, the shuttle went into the landing bay of the mothership. Chris and the 5 shocktroopers got out of the shuttle. A dark haired male came toward them. He stopped near them. So, this is the threat to our mission here. He doess not look like it," said the dark haired male, who is named Steven. Steven look over Chris. He wasn't impressed by Chris. Then, Chris saw a robotic sting ray in the window. It was colored dark red and black. Then, it came out of the window and into the landing bay. The 6 aliens heard a sound and turned their head to see where it came from. They ended up wishing that they didn't as the robotic sting ray started to attack them. They fell down from the attack, being knocked out by it. It hovered over Chris. Then, Chris heard a voice said "Trust me. I must strike you with my tail to give you your powers." Chris decided to trust the voice and allow the robotic sting ray to strike him with its tail. As it did, Chris felt power flowing into him. Then he send his right hand out and said, "Tranform." At that moment, a white light covered Chris, and the dark red and black armor of Kamen Rider Sting appear on him. Chris couldn't believe what has happen to him. He was Kamen Rider Sting, again. "I know you have questions, but it have to wait. More shocktroopers have arrived," warned the robotic sting ray. To be continued.

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10/15/09, 10:23 PM	#7
HenshinSlayer Comic Relief Join Date: 10/05/09 Posts: 30	Kamen rider sting didn't exist on 1983? Sorry, I don't understand your story of the rider.

10/18/09, 01:03 PM	#8
mbozzo Power Ranger Join Date: 08/15/09 Posts: 876	I don't know if there was a Kamen Rider Sting in Ventura during the year 1983, but there wasn't any Kamen Rider on the Earth that Chris was droped off. Chris and his advent beast was removed from the advent viod by a telepathic cry for help from the Starchild. Chris wasn't the only one who heard that cry for help thoughout hypertime. He was just the first to arrive.