my untitled fanfic i did based off a dream i had..R&R

[Esther]

Still Untitled story

Supergirl floated above hundreds of people with flashing cameras, yelling for her to come down and strike a pose. She didn’t, instead she Super-speeded down and held the door for a few people to come in. When they were all seated, She went up into the rafters and watched the Grammy’s, waiting in interest for her turn to go on stage and show the audience what she can do. After that she planned to have Superman drop by in the middle of the performance…. She listened very closely to the announcer then on the other side of the room when she heard someone gasping for air …then choking. She super-speeded right next to her and said “Are you al right, Ma’am?” No response “Are you chocking?” she asked. The woman clasped her hands around her throat and nodded. “It’s going to be al right”. She asked the audience if there was a paramedic in the building…A young man in his thirties stood up and rushed to her side. “Make sure she’s okay after the show”. “Okay” he said and started to do the Heimlich, “it’s not budging.” He said. “Let me try…Mrs.…this’ll probably hurt a little bit…Well okay…Correction: Maybe a lot…so don’t worry” She said during the commercials. She did a Heimlich and the chips came shooting out. “Please bring her some water, she said to the paramedic. “ Are you ok?” she asked the woman. “Yes thank you” she said while drinking some water. “On with the Show!” Supergirl exclaimed. “As you all know, I’m invulnerable, so to prove it a few SWAT officers are going to come out and shoot at me” “You Ready?!” “Yeah”, said the crowd. All of a sudden some ropes came swinging down from the rafters and some guys in all black outfits came onto the stage carrying guns and pointing them at Supergirl. “Wait a minute; you’re not the SWAT Team” Said Supergirl with a surprised look on her face. In the background Lex Luthor’s face appeared on the screen and said “You’re right Supergirl, They’re not the SWAT Team…but they’re more lethal”, he laughed. “LUTHOR!!”, she yelled with her eyes blazing. “What are you doing?!...Where’s Superman?” “Superman…Superman… Oh…Your cousin…He’s with me in a kryptonite cell. Well… Superman? Any Last words?”. “Yes... Kara…Save me! he said .The camera pans to Lex saying “Kara….interesting…Is that your Kryptonian name?”.” Yes….Don’t worry Kal, I’ll get you.”Hey Sweetheart, I think you forgot about us,” said a thug pointing at his gun while signaling others to aim at her. “ You do know that I’m invulnerable…Right?”, she said with a smirk. “Yes, but, me and my boys want to find out by ourselves…ATTACK!”, said the thug.. “Okay.. but I’m warning you…you wouldn’t like me when I’m angry “. A thug punches her in the stomach few times but she doesn’t wince.. “Okay…Now I’m angry” she says while flipping the guy over and throwing him at a bunch of black-suited thugs to her right, they go flying through a wall onto the street outside. “Anybody Else?”, she said. A big group of guys came rushing up to her and huddles around her trying to attack her “ So you want to play rough…huh?...well…OK”, and she blasts them with a Psychokineses blast, Which sends a bunch of them flying in every direction using her PK she holds them in place over the audience… “ Want to see a new trick?” she says and throws them out the same big hole through the wall. Her cape bursts into flames while two guys start rushing toward her, they burst into flames. “Need help cooling off?” she asked. She uses her Super-breath to cool them down then uses her PK to throw them out of the big new hole in the wall. “Ready, Set, Aim ,FIRE” Said an officer. Supergirl yawns while bullets are harmlessly bouncing off of her “Ohh.. that tickles” She uses her flame vision to melt the guns…and does a right hook to the first twenty people to her right which sends them flying out of the same big two holes in the wall. She shunts herself to the last twenty people and says “BOO!” with her eyes flaring…The guys scream and start running while Supergirl super-speed right in front of them saying “You’re leaving just when the party’s just started..?” She uses her TK to hold them down and counter blocks every other move they have. After that she just knocks them unconscious and leaves to save Superman.
Within minutes she’s at the Lexcorp Building staring at the window and teleports in. “Why Supergirl…what a pleasant surprise.” “Enough chit-chat Lex. Where’s Kal-El?” she says with demanding eyes. “Don’t fret my dear. You’ll get to him after you beat my guards…GET HER!” Lex yells and a force of 20 guards come barreling through. While Supergirl counter attacks and lights them on fire..Literally then she uses her TK to stop a barrage of bullets and drops them down on the floor. Lex is upstairs in the Kryptonite Cell having a chat with Superman. “It’s been 6 years. Now I’ve finally defeated you. …I’m President…and with your friend fighting my guards. You won’t have any time to recover. Then I’ll watch you wither away and die” Then he laughs maniacally. With all the guards down and out Supergirl looks for Kal-El with her X-ray vision, peering through the walls and ceiling. She finds him crouching almost to the ground in pain. She Super-speeds to up stairs finds a really heavy steel door outside the Cell and rips it open and demands that Lex should return or Else. “Or else what? My pretty little firecracker you’ll rip me in two?” “If not …then worse,” she says “I can hurt you more than you’ll ever know …”*
“Really? Let’s find out shall we.” Says Lex. Supergirl uses her PK and pins him to the wall while super speeding towards the Kryptonite cell. Tearing the steel Kryptonite bars and flies out the window with Superman. “Kal-El …Are you ok?” “Do I look ok to you?” “ umm…no” “(pause) Thanks for saving me” “ No problem…I’m going to take you to the Fortress of Solitude so you can recharge…Then I’ll get back to the show”

*" this is a paraphrase of a quote in Supergirl: Many Happy Returns , when Kara is confronting Rebel, right after Linda slugged her and took her place in the rocket.

Her exact words were "...I will Hurt you. I'll hurt you worse than you've ever been hurt in yoiur whole life. I can carve you upw as soon as look at you. I can break you, boil you, freeze you. I can do things you can't imagine. things I can't imagine until I have to...and then I'll improvise."


Now the book has the remaining words which were changed in the Wallpaper "Part of me is hoping you will attack. And part of my is praying...for your sake, and my own peace of mind...that you don't. It's up to you."
- from Dylan Clearbrook..used w/ permission


Esther/Supergrl
Cub Reporter



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Chapter 3 is on the way...**Spoiler** i'm trying to add the Fortress of Solitude...but the version that's in the Superman/Batman comics...all shiny floors and stuff....there are going to be three new additions to the FOS ,an ID scanner/fingerprint/eye scanner, a Recharge Room, plus a room for all the awesome aliens Supes has collected over the years!

Supergrl
Cub Reporter





a change in Point of view....here's the next chapter

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I'm doing this as me...okay...here it goes...


They arrive at the Fortress and get scanned… They walked through a few doors into a hall way. While I’m walking Superman asks, “Tell me again, why I made all these hallways.” I cross my arms, roll my eyes and tell him “You built this place as a Fortress of Solitude…Don’t tell me you’re getting lazy” “I’m not saying that….” He stops and says quietly that I needed my super-hearing to hear him “I need to recharge…right now…. I can’t wait” We start walking ahead to the Recharge room and he gets his hand in the scanner with a little difficulty. I see his hand shake while getting it scanned, he almost collapses near the giant ship…I drag him to the ship’s door and I put him in gently... I managed to push the button when he got inside before it closed on my hand… I look at him with worry for a few minutes deciding whether or not to leave him or get an answer as to why Mr. luthor did this. I decide to leave him and tell him that I need to take care of some business with Lex Luthor. He stops the ship from activating and says “ Whatever you do Mae…don’t hurt him” I sad I won’t…if I did it’ll be all over the newspapers…he manages a laugh and I’m off the ground soaring to Luthorcorp

I’ve had my doubts about Kal-El and how much he put into caring for me and others…I can’t stand it if he passes away…I don’t know why, but I have a bad feeling about this visit.. I’d better trust my instinct and call J’ohn to check out if he’s ok...I called him and he said he'll be over in a few minutes. In the meantime, I'm soaring above buildings that are rising and sinking as Ispeed toward Luthorcorp..It's kind of funny that i've never really realized until now that Luthorcorp is adjacent to The Daily Planet..i laugh it off as i put on a stern face descending to Mr. Luthor's giagantic office window. I knock a few times







Some messages i got from a guy named Hyperion on the www.blutights.net/the planet forums...and possiblly some answers as well..if you're a Sg geek!
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Originally Posted by Hyperion
Can't believe nobody's posted in this thread Supergrl...

I like this story... but I'm abit confused... is this something you've written all by yourself ..? It seems like you're quoting a comic issue also.. Please clarify.

And another thing. This is the Telekinetic Supergirl right? Not the real Kara Zor-El?



thanks...yes i did write this all by myself...Dylan Clearbrook has allowed me to use a variation of a quote i have found on a wallpaper of his...that's the quote at the bottom of one section of the story...and yes it is the TK Supergirl i am talking about..not the new Kara Zor-El one...;D...i'm glad you like it so far...i have so much to add to it...

Supergrl



Hyperion
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Supergrl
thanks...yes i did write this all by myself...Dylan Clearbrook has allowed me to use a variation of a quote i have found on a wallpaper of his...that's the quote at the bottom of one section of the story...and yes it is the TK Supergirl i am talking about..not the new Kara Zor-El one...;D...i'm glad you like it so far...i have so much to add to it...



Looking forward to it

But, pardon me for being abit ignorent here... but... from what I read there she seems to have all of Supermans powers, the telekinetic powers, he calls here "Kara" and... she's invulnerable to Kryptonite...?

eh... is that really how the TK Supergirl is?
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Hyperion



Supergrl
Cub Reporter
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Hyperion
Looking forward to it

But, pardon me for being abit ignorent here... but... from what I read there she seems to have all of Supermans powers, the telekinetic powers, he calls here "Kara" and... she's invulnerable to Kryptonite...?

eh... is that really how the TK Supergirl is?


y'know what?...i'm not really sure about that....i actually got the info from the braveandthe bold.net....she actually does call herself Kara....i think........................

Supergrl
Cub Reporter


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Quote:
Originally Posted by Hyperion
Looking forward to it

But, pardon me for being abit ignorent here... but... from what I read there she seems to have all of Supermans powers, the telekinetic powers, he calls here "Kara" and... she's invulnerable to Kryptonite...?

eh... is that really how the TK Supergirl is?

..She doesn't have "All of Superman's Powers"..she has a mixture of some of them...Super Strength, X-Ray Vision,Super Speed and such...but i'm trying to get her powers as a kind of a blessing fo her to use.....i called her "Kara" here because i was kinda bored.in the 9/11 fanfic i used the name "Mae"....it varies on what kind of Supergirl i'm useing here..i'm trying to use a blend of the Linda Danvers/Angel of Fire Version + the animated JLU Series episode "Chaos at the Earth's core" where she's kind "invulnerable to kryptonite" for only ,like, a half hour... or a few minutes or so...i'm not really sure how invulnerable she is at this point in time...y'know what?..let's put it this way...she has a "Feeling of being weakend when exposed to Kryptonite"..she doesn't fall like a sack of potatoes like when Superman is exposed to it...she CAN stand it for a little while.. Then she has to get away from it..it's the same as if she's in a blast furnace or a refridgerator..she can stand being cold or hot...but she wouldn't like it too much....hopefully that answered you question ...
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adding some more stuff to Untitled fanfic...i'll type it up in a few days
Current mood: bored



trying to add more stuff to my fanfic....i need to write it up...i'll try and add more stuff to the Untitled one in a few days...'cause that's going very well...i really like it so far....i'm just trying to decide whether i should put a mixture of

Lex/Metallo/Brainiac or just Lex/Brainiac combined...just tell me which one's the best...plus i'm trying to add Mxy to the story as well