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Old 05/29/06, 08:27 PM   #7
Razi
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I dunno. I think its cool, and hey, practice is always a good thing. If at first you don't succeed......try, try again.

I don't know what kind of suggestions o give you, but I think that there might be something wrong. I see a line go through Emma's face, I dunno if it's supposed to be there but its somekind of line. I say, remove it. The line kinda makes it look
1. tacky
2. like she has an alter-ego.

I'm not trying to slam your work, but in my opinion, it needs some work.

-Razi
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