Global Defence - I Only Wanted to Save the World

[Ranger 12]

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Casting Call: http://www.rangertalk.com/showthread.php?p=11992#post11992
Game: http://www.rangertalk.com/showthread.php?t=978

Post any questions, comments, iscussion, insuts, wrong thread posts or conversation that will eventually go off topic about Global Defence here.



That probabbly the longest it's ever taken me to write CC, personally i think it was pretty good.

[TheRoyalKnight]

expect a bio from me soon lol

[Ranger 12]

Ger: Theres a few things in your bio that need changing. First the history need to be two paragraphs long minimum, second theres a lot of writing errors, also you didn't mention your powers at all in your bio and finally your hero seems a bit unerpowered mostley because of his actual power and you didn't explain any of the equipment. Ph and you need to add your codename that was my fault I idn't realize it wasn't in the template. Can you try and fix these?


On a note relating to bios mine will be up soon for Rider and Warp.

[TheRoyalKnight]

ok ill fix it

[Ranger 12]

Ok it's better in most fields though theres three problems story wise: Global Defence is put together to fight Warp, a former suprhero, if he ever attacks. Also your guy still seems undrpowered, how bout when he joins Global Defence he get's some H.E.R.O. Issue Gear an Weapons. Also my bio said that small time crime in Knight City wasn't very high, maybe if your character didn't live in Knight City at first but move there to join GD. Just some suggestions.

[TheRoyalKnight]

ok i fixed it again lol

[SHR]

Expect a bio from me soon! Question do our codenames all have to have Rider?

[Ranger 12]

Ok cool. I'll let it stay for a few days.

SHR: No codenames can be whatever you want, you know as long as Ice isn't shooting balls of fire lol. Looking forward to the bio.

[TheRoyalKnight]

ah ok i made a villain Bio to go along with my hero

[SHR]

can we have more then one power?

[Ranger 12]

sure, as long as it doesn't make the character over powered.

[SHR]

Sweet. :) Ill have it posted by tomarow.

[Ranger 12]

Ger: Like the io, I'll accept it if I accept your offer one (Considering they seem kinda closely linked.)

I've also posted the bio for Warp, and I know I said not to overpower characters but thats what really a central part of warp. The absent history is to add mysetry, more of his history will be revealed in the game, the absent history is in no way the result of me not being able to think of one, no seriously, I mean it.

[SHR]

I've also posted the bio for Warp, and I know I said not to overpower characters but thats what really a central part of warp. The absent history is to add mysetry, more of his history will be revealed in the game, the absent history is in no way the result of me not being able to think of one, no seriously, I mean it.

Ill have to interrogate you about that? :D

[Ranger 12]

Dude I'm under portection from H.E.R.O. you'd have to get past all our security...unless you attack within the week, we haven't repaired the building yet. :D

[TheRoyalKnight]

ok because there enemys

[SHR]

Dude I'm under portection from H.E.R.O. you'd have to get past all our security...unless you attack within the week, we haven't repaired the building yet. :D

Okay then! At nightfall I will strike!:p

[Ranger 12]

Damn you! Hah but you'll never find my hq...pay no attention to the large building in the centre of Knight City with a H on it.

[SHR]

Damn you! Hah but you'll never find my hq...pay no attention to the large building in the centre of Knight City with a H on it.

So does that mean I should go to the big building with a Q on it?

Btw, im almost done my bio.

[Ranger 12]

Yes do that, blow up the Q Building, also hang around once you've set the timer I heard their having a party.

Can't wait to read your bio.

[SHR]

I know man, theirs going to be fireworks and stuff. But I cant go, im busy tracking you down. lol

[Ranger 12]

Come on it'll be un, I'm going. Wait, ain't I avoiding you?

On a note more related to this thread your bios been accepted, though I need you to ad a description of your costume.

[SHR]

I go add it now.

[SHR]

Done!

Btw! I heard the party was canceled and is being moved to the builing with an H.

[Ranger 12]

What who told you that!? I mean yes, but it's an out of town H Building. Borrow my car to get there, pay no attention to the large tracking device on it or my tracker seeking missiles.

Btw do you think you could ask some people to join.

[SHR]

No, I don't think i could ask people. :) Ill try and find some.

[TheRoyalKnight]

my bios ar e accepted to or not?

[pharmmajor]

Hey man, I posted a bio. It's for a villain in Global Attack; is that okay?

[Ranger 12]

Cool, both ger and pharmmajors bios are accepted. Though pharmmajor I ned you to change the end part. Warp is only the suspected cause of Global Attack, maybe you could say she was recruited by somone who she couldn't identify, that way it could be taken as Warp or just another member of GA.

Also to both pharmmajor and SHR feel free to create a second chracter on the other team.

[Ranger 12]

NekoLLX: Could you expand the history an personality a bit.

[pharmmajor]

Gotcha. I'll fix it.

[SHR]

Gotcha. I'll fix it.

Btw, I hope it was alright for me to add a vehicle to my bio.

[Ranger 12]

Yeah it's fine, aslong as its not super powered, thats my gimmick.

[Ranger 12]

Thanks to Anahi there is now a banner and an image of the Non Powered Armour.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y250/karol_tomy/Ranger12P.jpg
Non Powered Armour

Also LLX I still need you to expand the history.

[Ranger 12]

Ok NekoLLX's bio has been accepted, though LLX the term HERO refers to non powered operatives rather than the H.E.R.O. Super Heroes.

Theres now only on hero spot left and three villain spots left.

[Ranger 12]

Ok I've decided to remove the fifth hero spot an fill out Global Attack with two NCPs so we can strt soon. I just need a confirmation everyone is still playing.

Anyway heres a small plan for the first episode/story/chapter:
Formation
While everyone is recovering from Warp's attack on the H.E.R.O. Building Eric Sparrow receives permission to put together a new team. Gathering the new recruits an the Red Rider he explains the purpose of Global Defence. There first mission comes later when attack by an unknown group of super villains (Global Attack) on the H.E.R.O. Building occurs, with no defences the group must work together to oppose this attack.

This will be mostley an introduction with later episoe/storys/chapter having more complex plots.

[TheRoyalKnight]

well im in

[SHR]

Ranger12 Im sorrry, but something has come up so Im gonna have to stay in the rpg. Hope you understand :) lol! Im In fo show Homie

[pharmmajor]

I'm still in.

[Ranger 12]

Ok cool, Only LLX left.

Also I've started writing a prequel story set between the start of Jack's time as the re Rider and Warp going insane. Expect to see the first part in the fan fiction section soon.

[NekoLLX]

im in, nice armor

[Ranger 12]

Cool I'll have the rpg up later.

[SHR]

Sweeet :) Ill be ready 2 post

[Ranger 12]

Ok game threads up, instructions are in there, go post.

or villains you'll show up with the rest of Global Attack when they...well attack.

[SHR]

well i posted :)

[pharmmajor]

Let me know when Global Attack strikes so I can post with my character.

[Ranger 12]

Just to let you all know I edited my last post as I wasn't to happy with how it was originally.

[Ranger 12]

Hey everyone I've just finished the first part of the prequel story, I probabbly post it in fan-fiction later today. However I need a title, so far Ive thought of Rise of the Rier and Crimson Beginnings, so can you tell me any suggestions or what you think of those titles?

Also once everones gathere and everythings been explained the team will go through a quick holo-training simulation against a villain. If you want pharmmajor, a holographic representation of your character coul be played by you to fight against the team. Tell me what you think.

[pharmmajor]

Sure thing. When the training starts, virtual Minddancer will be there to bring the pain!

[Ranger 12]

Ok cool, now all we need is for SHR to post.

[SHR]

right on it boss!

Btw, the party was great. I got a limo to drive me. I gave your car to your teddy bear to drive.

[SHR]

hey ranger12, Since we havent had ours powers debut in the rpg yet, I thought it would it alright if I changed one of my powers? Was that cool? Or should I change it back.

[Ranger 12]

Yeah thats fine.

Just a qustion: Does anyone have any title suggestions for the prequel story?

[SHR]

maybe something like

My Life before H.E.R.O

[Ranger 12]

Rider ws H.E.R.O project so it wouldn't make sense. Thanks though.

[Ranger 12]

pharmmajor: Ok the training's began so you can now post as holographic Minddancer.

[SHR]

Btw, for any of you who don't undertsand what Adam did with the dime. Its basically what Kevin Levin does in Ben 10 Alien Force or what Sydney(PINk SPD) did when she touched something her hand became it. I think nekkoLLX knows what im talking about.

[Ranger 12]

Ok Global Attack is about to strike, for all heroes just carry on with what your doing until you here gun shots. Villains get in posistion to attack the H Building, specifically target the GD members.

[SHR]

Wahoo! cant wait.

[Gold Ranger]

I just wanted to say that I've been reading this RPG and I love the idea and the story so far, Ranger. :D

This has been a random Goldie pop-up. :p

[Ranger 12]

Thanks Goldie.

Just thought I'd say to everyone to check out the fan fiction section as the first part of the prequel story is now up. The first story will feature the origins of Red Rider and Metallic, oh and fight scenes, lots and lots of fight scenes.

[Ranger 12]

ger: what was with your post, you said Steel was already in the building, also he walked past a group of heavily armed guards and a superhero without a word and then instanly appeare in the cafeteria.

[TheRoyalKnight]

o i didnt know he was still outside and also i taught joke was provideing a distraction for steel.

[Ranger 12]

No Joke's a superhero so do you think you could edit your post?

[TheRoyalKnight]

ok ill do it now its fixed.

[Ranger 12]

Ok everyone pharmmajor hasn't been online recently and Mind Dancer is needed pretty soon, should I replace pm or just keep waiting?

[Ranger 12]

Ok I'm replacing DDancer with two NPCs, Boomer and Sudden Death, I'll make a post bringing them into the fight soon.

[SHR]

Yeah im confused to what i should be having Adam do now. hes outside and is told to not let the fight be brung outside.

[Ranger 12]

I knew I forgot something, in my post I was supposed to have Sudden Death attack Adam, I'll go edit it and include that part now.

[TheRoyalKnight]

R!2 im posting another villain bio(your choice where to put him)i couldnt find the casting call

Nameavid Smith(likes to be called Dave)
Alias:SilverWolf
Age:22
Theme Song: Animal I have Become-Three Days Grace
Powers and abilities/gear:SilverWolf has enhanced senses and strength and has razor sharp claws
Weaknesses:SilverWolf's weaknesses are silver from daggers to spears etc
Appearance: (The reason why his human form isnt hear is explained in my bio)
History: Dave was born in a small cottage in the woods far away from town.Sometimes as a kid Dave and his family traveled into the city to get goods and clothes they were looked at funny for being in a beat up truck and dirty clothes it made Dave jealous to see everyone elses wealth and looks.Dave's father kept him in check though and taught him the values of hard work and loyalty.

As time went by and Dave got older he began doing odd jobs in town and sooner or later he began hanging around with the wrong crowd and his dad tried to keep him out of the city.But Dave refused to listen and one night he got sick of the hard labor and the annoying rules that he had to follow at home and left without telling anyone.And this is the start of the downfall of Dave Smith and the start of something new.

Dave began commiting crimes in and out of town and formed a gang of some sorts and he earned the nickname of Wolf for how aggressive he was in battle with rivals and commitng crimes.Dave began borrowing money from strange people and soon he couldnt pay them back.Those "Strange" people soon came after him and ejected him with a werid liquid Dave didnt think of it until he began seeing changes.

One day he woke up and looked into the mirror and he saw bright Silver fur and sharp teeth and claws and he forgot almost everything about his past andran out of his apartment and all the townpeople ran from him everyone did.He left the town and became a loner trying to stay away from others but he has a taste for revenge,his past and a cure and he is willing to do anything for it even working for a madman.