crazyblood
08-13-2008, 12:01 AM
hey guys. latley i haven't been able to tell if my rpg were crappy so i need an opinion besides my own. if there is any flaws or if its worth joining let me know please. thanks!
Power rangers: elemental defenders
Story: through all time it seems that something has been watching us. Something inhuman. Weather it be good or evil they has always frightened us. Lurking it what seemed are imagination. But what if they weren’t our imaginations. What if they were real. The story I’m about to tell you may sound hard to believe, but it the truth. The story of how six heroes saved us from them. The six defenders.
This is how it started. Long ago, there were creatures roaming the earth. They caused trouble and rained havoc on the world all lead by a leader named brimstone. Now of course with these evil creatures, there were good ones as well. Well one day six teenagers wandered into a village for good creatures. The leader of the village invited them into her home. She called herself Veressa.
She told them the evil creatures were called dragonites and that they were always raiding and destroying there village. Then she spoke of six crystals she had found in a sacred temple. She said they protected the village from the dragonites. But then dragonites came to the force field cause by the crystals. They through spears at each of the crystals and the crystals shattered.
Veressa asked the teenagers to go and grab the remains of the crystals. They nodded and ran out of her cottage and each one headed towards each of the shattered remains. As each one approached each crystal what seemed like spirits each the same color of the crystals. They rapped around the teenagers and turned them into armored warriors.
Each teenager ran back to veressa’s cottage to soon be surrounded by dragonites. Each dragonite had a weapon in its hand. All of the teenagers suddenly reached for there side and pulled out daggers and attacked. In seconds the dragonites were down. They ran inside they and explained. Veressa reached for a scroll and read. She told them that if the crystals were destroyed there powers would find a worthy host and attach to them. She also explained whomever gets chosen must protect the earth with elemental powers.
By the time she was done explaining the dragonites were gone. This was the beginning of the six heroes. The six elemental defenders!
Rangers:
red fire defender ranger: m
blue water defender ranger: m
black earth defender ranger: m
yellow lightning defender ranger: f
pink wind defender ranger: f
white ice defender ranger: f
allies:
Veressa: she is the one who leads power rangers
Mageroe: an inventor who designs the rangers weapons
Morphing call: crystal power! Release the <element> spirit!
Villains:
Brimstone: leader of all evil creatures
Marigal: his evil witch that makes posions to help aid the dragonites
Dragonites: creatures made by marigal to serve brimstone
Weapons:
Main weapon: daggers
Secondary weapons:
Red: sword
Blue: hammer
Black: scythe
Yellow: tanfas
Pink: fan
White: staff
Power rangers: elemental defenders
Story: through all time it seems that something has been watching us. Something inhuman. Weather it be good or evil they has always frightened us. Lurking it what seemed are imagination. But what if they weren’t our imaginations. What if they were real. The story I’m about to tell you may sound hard to believe, but it the truth. The story of how six heroes saved us from them. The six defenders.
This is how it started. Long ago, there were creatures roaming the earth. They caused trouble and rained havoc on the world all lead by a leader named brimstone. Now of course with these evil creatures, there were good ones as well. Well one day six teenagers wandered into a village for good creatures. The leader of the village invited them into her home. She called herself Veressa.
She told them the evil creatures were called dragonites and that they were always raiding and destroying there village. Then she spoke of six crystals she had found in a sacred temple. She said they protected the village from the dragonites. But then dragonites came to the force field cause by the crystals. They through spears at each of the crystals and the crystals shattered.
Veressa asked the teenagers to go and grab the remains of the crystals. They nodded and ran out of her cottage and each one headed towards each of the shattered remains. As each one approached each crystal what seemed like spirits each the same color of the crystals. They rapped around the teenagers and turned them into armored warriors.
Each teenager ran back to veressa’s cottage to soon be surrounded by dragonites. Each dragonite had a weapon in its hand. All of the teenagers suddenly reached for there side and pulled out daggers and attacked. In seconds the dragonites were down. They ran inside they and explained. Veressa reached for a scroll and read. She told them that if the crystals were destroyed there powers would find a worthy host and attach to them. She also explained whomever gets chosen must protect the earth with elemental powers.
By the time she was done explaining the dragonites were gone. This was the beginning of the six heroes. The six elemental defenders!
Rangers:
red fire defender ranger: m
blue water defender ranger: m
black earth defender ranger: m
yellow lightning defender ranger: f
pink wind defender ranger: f
white ice defender ranger: f
allies:
Veressa: she is the one who leads power rangers
Mageroe: an inventor who designs the rangers weapons
Morphing call: crystal power! Release the <element> spirit!
Villains:
Brimstone: leader of all evil creatures
Marigal: his evil witch that makes posions to help aid the dragonites
Dragonites: creatures made by marigal to serve brimstone
Weapons:
Main weapon: daggers
Secondary weapons:
Red: sword
Blue: hammer
Black: scythe
Yellow: tanfas
Pink: fan
White: staff