The Transfer Back

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The Transfer Back - Chapter I

Kat has moved back to austrailia, Kimberly has just returned. She is once again the pink ranger. Billy still has his My Little Pony collection.

"Tomorrow's the big day" said Kimberly.

"I am going to miss being a power ranger after this" said Adam.

""It has been fun helping you save the world" said Rocky.

"a My Little Pony collection is great" said billy.

"Well, 3 power rangers leaving, and the former ones are returning! this is not good!" said Lord Zedd

at the command center

"You have a big mission, and you must go to the deserted planet and retrieve the sword again, you'll need 2 Titanuses, because it might take 2 ultrazords to defeat Master Vile's next monster, and your fromer rangers will return soon" said Zordon.

"Rocky, Adam and Aisha will go on their last quest with you as power rangers" Zordon added.

"It's hard for me to keep from crying" said Kimberly sadly.

"Good Luck, Rangers" said zordon

"It's Morphin' Time" announces Tommy

"White Ranger Power!" Cried Tommy
"Black Ranger Power!" Cried Adam
"Pink Ranger Power!" Cried Kimberly
"Blue Ranger Power!" Cried Billy
"Yellow Ranger Power!" Cried Aisha
"Red Ranger Power!" Cried Rocky

they fly to the deserted planet

Serpentera is back and more powerful than ever before.

"I hope we find that statue soon". Said Kimberly

TO BE CONTINUED...

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The Transfer Back - Chapter II

The rangers still try to find the statue with the ring and the map

"I hope we find that statue soon." Said Billy

"Me too" said Rocky

"I am going to miss angel grove" said Aisha

"Same here" Said Adam

"The rangers are going for the statue" said Master Vile

"Let's use serpentera" said Rita

the vrew boards serpenters

at angel grove high school

"We will be having a Good-Bye party for Rocky, Adam and Aisha" siad Ms. Appleby

the rangers continue searching for the statue to get the sword

"It's been fun saving the world with you guys" said Rocky.

serpentera attacks the rangers

"Those rangers are after the sword" Said Master Vile

"what are we going to do, my dreaded father" said Rita.

"10 steps then we are at the statue" said Adam

Serpentera attacks the rangers

"I don't know how much longer we are goign to last" said Rocky

"Metallic Armor Power Up!" cried all 6 rangers

TO BE CONTINUED...

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The Transfer Back - Chapter III

The rangers are still finding that statue

Bulk and Skull find banana peekls and put them in trash cans

"this monster shiould stop those power brats, here is Banana Shell" said Master Vile

"I will make sure those power rangers are defeated" said Banana Shell

"We found the statue" said Rocky

"Time to turn out the lights in Angel Grove, and all over the world! Goodnight forever, Power Rangers!(Serpentera powers down) Goldar! I said turn off the lights in Angel Grove, not in here!" sais Zedd

they get the sword and return home to angel grove

"Where's Tommy" said Kimberly

"I got the sword" said Tommy

Jason, Zack And Trini return

"Jason! Zack! Trini!" said Tommy

"Departing Rangers, you have served with courage, I thank you. I know that in your new life, you will serve with dignity, humility, and strength. Go now, and make the world a better place. The power will always be with you, and will protect you" Said Zordon to Rocky, Adam and aisha

The transfer transfers the powers from Rocky Adam and Aisha back to Jason Zack and Trini, and Rocky Adam And Aisha hand back their power coins.

"Zack, you will control the black frog and black shogunzord; Trini, you will control the yellow bear and the yellow shogunzord; and Jason, you will control the red ape and the red shogunzord" said zordon"

"Back To Action!" said Tommy

The rangers battle the tengas

Rita and Zedd make Banana Shell Grow

the rangers call on their shogunzords and ninja zords

Ninja Megafalzonzord and Shogun Megafalxonzord are formed

2 tintanuses come and both ultrazords destroy Banana Shell

"let's go home" said Zedd.

they try and serpentera is still down

"Well, do we have power yet, Thomas Edison?" said Zedd

"Just enough to get home, master" said Goldar

"Blast! Here sits all this deadly machinery, and there's not enough power to destroy an ant" said Zedd

"Congratulations on a job well done on your first battle back, Jason, Zack And Trini" said Zordon

"yes it is true you defeated Master Vile today, but it's not the end, only the beginning. He and serpentera will be back more powerful than ever" said Zordon

"and Tommy, we are able to return you to green ranger, but it will take time" Said Zordon

"and now, it's time to bid farewell to Rocky, Adam, and Aisha" added Zordon

at the youth center, Ernie made a "Welcome Back, Jason Zack and Trini' cake

"We will miss you all," said Adam.

""This is goodbye," said Aisha

"We will write to you," said Rocky

Jason sings "Down The Road" on the piano in C-Major.

At Angel Grove park

Jason shakes hands with Rocky

Zack shakes hands With Adam

Trini hugs Aisha

"We've come to say goodbye" said Billy

"I hope you will visit us again real soon" said Trini

"Till we meet again" said Adam

"Till we meet again" Said Zack

Back at the command center

Rocky, Adam and Aisha are on the bus going back to Stone Canyon.

"I am going to miss them" said Kimberly tearfully

"It is sad to see our friends leave, but on the other hand, it is exciting to have our 3 former rangers back" said Billy

"POWER RANGERS!" cried all 6 rangers

THE END

[Storm Dragon]

Meh I didn't understand it. Good concept, I'll give you that, but there are plenty of questions I want to know:

1. If Kimberly returned, then where's Kat? How come she isn't involved in the story?
2. Why did Adam, Rocky, and Aisha leave? It's not like 'Oh here you guys are. Let's hand you back the coins. Plus the Ninja Coins (seeing as it takes place in Season 3) aren't the same as the Dino Coins).
3. Lack of detail
4. Repetitive (eg he said/she said)

I don't want to go any further. Just for encouragement, I'd love to see you at least see you try.

[PinkCraneIsForever]

You know what? Ignore the "constructive" criticisms. This is your story. You have the right to write whatever you feel is positive. Keep writing please!