DominicHargan
04-01-2008, 01:10 AM
*Logo to come
Rally Charge
Storyline:
Three teenagers discover firsthand that we are not alone after each witness a meteor crash land on Earth. What begins as an astrological phenomenon soon turns into a nightmare as it is brought to light that the meteor harbored an alien being only known as the Master. With his powers he is able to re-awaken several entombed spirits to wreak havoc on Earth. With time running out, Dr. Christian, the teens Auto Shop teacher decides that it is time to use the Rally Morphers he invented, and chooses his three brightest students to use them. But something just isn't right, and the teens know that Dr. Christian is hiding something, something that may change the fate of mankind as we know it.
Rangers
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Brendan Boyd: Brendan is a mysterious, often shadowy figure. Not much is known about him except that he likes to ride, and he likes to ride fast. He is very competitive and never backs down from a challenge, no matter what it is. He's a stickler for throwing out the rulebook and doing things his own way, which sometimes irritates his fellow rangers.
Carrie Evans: Carrie is a southern country girl who can be a bit tomboyish at times, but still knows how to be a lady. She's extremely easy to get along with, and fun to be around as her cheerful personality is very infectious. (Though Brendan has yet to be affected by this). She is always there when you need her, and will always come through for her friends.
James Edwardson: James is the self-proclaimed religious freak of the group. He is the leader of his worship team at his church, and playes the guitar in his spare time. He's always the one to go to for advice, or if you need someone to listen to you. Sometimes he'll hit you hard with the truth, whether you want to hear it or not. He is the smartest member of the group, and often proves it by analyzing every situation to find the best possible result with the least possible risk.
Episodes:
Episode #1. Open Your Eyes
Episode #2. Unity
Episode #3. Fireproof
Episode #4. Echleon
Episode #5. Hindsight
Episode #6. Epidemic
Episode #7. Further from Myself Part 1
Episode #8. Further from Myself Part 2
Episode #9. Hypnotized
Episode #10. Rewind Part 1
Episode #11. Rewind Part 2
Episode #12. Aftershock
Episode #13. Awake
Episode #14. The Reckoning
Episode #15. Tragedy
Episode #16. Last goodbye
Episode #17. Angel in Disguise Part 1
Episode #18. Angel in Disguise Part 2
Episode #19. Crossfire
Episode #20. Resolution
Episode #21. Turn it Up
Episode #22. Reckless Youth
Episode #23. State of Emergency
Episode #24. I Fade Away
Episode #25. Our Escape Part 1
Episode #26. Our Escape Part 2
Episode #27. Dangerous
DominicHargan
04-01-2008, 10:27 PM
Episode #1. Open your Eyes
Inside a cold, dark room lay a half asleep, half awake teenager trying to enjoy what little sleep he could get before the next day came. He would have gotten that sleep too, if it hadn't been for a loud noise that woke him up from seemingly dreamless state.
"Jeez, can you pipe down out there? I'm trying to sleep!" the teen began to grumble as he got out of bed to see exactly what had made the loud ruckus so he knew just who or what to chew out. His shaggy brown hair was now visible as was his grumpy demeanor. When he poked his head out of his bedroom window, all he saw was a quiet street, and a single bright light flying through the sky overhead. The light suddenly vanished from the sky and appeared on the ground below, ending in a empty field.
"That's odd. I've never seen anything like it before in my life." he said as he walked away from the window and over towards his dresser. He glanced back at the alarm clock which now read 4:30 AM. "Damn, it's way too early for me to be doing this shit." He complained as he got dressed.
After finally putting on clothes suitable for the cold outdoors, the teen made one final walkthrough of his room to make sure he wasn't missing anything before leaving. he set his bed up to look like he was still sleeping, and quietly snuck out the front door to see just exactly what had landed in the desolate field.
***
In the nearby hills a young girl was taking a night hike on some unknown dirth paths. Her long blond hair was tied back in a ponytail, and in her hand clasped a walking stick which she used to help her along the trail. "Man, what a night. Clear skies, the stars are out, and I can even see a small bright light wander through the sky."
She had to take a doubletake. Accoring to her calculations there wasn't supposed to be a small bright light in the sky at this time of night. She glanced at her wrist watch which now read 5:33 AM. "I'm certain that that wasn't supposed to be there." She said to herself as she watched the light touch down in an abandoned field.
"I guess I might as well check it out." she said to herself as she made a complete 180 and began hiking in the direction of the light, which was slowly starting to fade. "Whatever this ends up being, it sure beats whatever I'll find stargazing and night hiking."
Her complexity was that of a country girl, but she was willing chase a paranormal object if it meant learning about things outside of Earth. Now don't get me wrong, she doesn't necessarily believe in aliens and such. But she does believe in scientific facts, and she was hoping to prove one by finding whatever ended up on Earth after the light passed.
***
A Young teenager was outside on his back porch praying to God. Don't ask why he waits until 5:30 in the morning to do so, but he does. "God, I don't know what to do. I feel so lost and confused. Please just give me a sign." he lifted his head up and stared up at the night sky, almost as if he was waiting to see god's face staring right back at him.
In that one moment he saw the same flashing light in the night sky that had already piqued the curiousity of the other two teenagers. This guy, on the other hand, didn't want to find it out of curiousity, but more out belief that this was God's sign to him, and would ultimately point him in the direction in life that he needed to go. "God, if that was your sign then I'll follow it to see where it leads me, whether it be a spiritual journey or a physical one."
With that notion he grabbed a few essentials, his bible, and his pair of boots before heading off towards what he believed to be his destiny. Along the way he read scriptures out of the bible, and began to close his eyes at times and invison his walk with God. Unfortunantly he was walking on streets,a nd at 5:35 in the morning there were still cars roaming the concrete roads that he walked upon.
***
After the fiasco that had awoken him, the teenage boy finally arrived at the site of the landing. What he was was a large crator, and an even larger curiousity as to what caused it. At that moment, the blond girl approached the guy and the crater, just as bewildered as he was. 'So, what do you think caused this?" She asked him.
"Dunno." he replied in a monotonous tone. He turned and eyed the gril, who to him liiked like a hillbilly from hollywood. never the less, he recognized her from school, as they both had Auto Shop class together. "Hey, aren't you Carrie Evans?" He asked her, just to be sure.
"Yeah, I am. And you are?" Carrie asked with a semi puzzled look on her face.
"Brendan Boyd. We go to school together. You sit right in front of me in Auto Shop class." Brendan replied, almost surprised that she didn't recognize him. He assumed that it must have been the darkness that made it hard to see his face, and assumably let her off the hook.
"Oh, right. You're the guy who no one can ever figure out. All you ever do is ride your motorcycle and keep to yourself most of the time." Carrie in an almost factual tone. "Speaking of which, where is you bike? I've never seen you anywhere without it."
Brendan looked a bit annoyed at her comment. He thought to himself that she didn't know him at all, at that it was best if it stayed that way. "Bike makes nosie, and I didn't want to wake up the folks." Brendan replied with a sort of self confidence. "So what's your excuse? Why are you out here this early in the morning?"
Carrie took a minute to process Brendan's answer before replying. "If you must know, I was out on a night hike stargazing when I came across the light in the sky. I figured whatever it was was bound to be better than whatever I found stargazing on my night hike." Carrie paused a bit before continuing. "So what brought you out here?"
"Damn thing woke me up, and so I had to find out what exaclty it was. call it curiousity if you will." Brendan replied. It was at that moment that the third teenager arrived in an almost cheery tone. "What do you have to be happy about Chuck E. Cheese?" Brendan asked in an almost annoyed tone.
The young guy stopped and focused his attention on both Brendan and Carrie before speaking up. "My destiny lies behind those crater walls." He said in a cheery tone.
Brendan looked at the guy in disgust. "Destiny? Are you some kind of religious freak or something?" he asked with a slight irritation in his voice. "Well, whatever you are there sure aint no destiny behind those crater walls. You can mark my words on it."
"To each his own." the guy said as he realized that he didn't recognize either of them. "My name's James. James Edwardson. And you are?" James asked as he extended his hand out in friendship. Brendan just looked at him in disgust, not willing to shake the poor boys hand nor tell him his name.
"I'm Carrie. Carrie Evans." Carrie said as she took up James' handshake. "And that sullen guy over there is Brendan Boyd." Carrie explained to James. "You might remember that we both go to school with you, and even have Auto Shop class with you." Carrie had hoped that her clarification was understood by James.
"Right, now I remember. The country girl and the mysterious boy. How could I have forgotten?" James said in an almost apologetic tone. The look on Brendan's face showed that he was displeased at the fact that James thought he knew who he was. Carrie had thought the same thing, but James made it a rule he would never touch a lady. Guys were a different stroy.
Brendan walked over to James and grabbed him by the scruff of his collar, pulling him closer to his face. "Don't think for a second that you know me, or know who I am." Brendan said in an angry tone. "Cause I have no problem fulfilling your destiny by beating you into a bloody pulp."
"Put him down." Carrie ordered as she joined in the discussion. Brendan gave in an set James back down on the ground. He gave James an evil look, and then gave the same look to Carrie. "What the hell's your problem?" Carrie was clearly annoyed by Brendan's actions, and wished that he would calm down a bit.
"Stay out of things that don't pertain to you." Brendan ordered in an almost threatening voice. "My business is my own, and shall be treated as such. I swore to myself that I'd never touch a lady but for you I might be able to make an exception." Brendan then eyed James once more. "Luckily your girlfriend is here to save you. Next time you might not be so lucky." Brendan threatened as he began to walk towards the crater.
Carrie then walked over to James, her long blond hair blowing in the wind. "Just for get him. He's just one big mysterious jerk." Carrie advised as she put her arm over his shoulder and around his neck.
James turned and looked her straight in the eyes. "Hey, thanks. I know you could've just stayed out of it but you didn't. Thanks." James said as he leaned closer to her.
"It's no problem at all." Carrie said as she leaned in closer to James as well. The two were about to kiss when Brendan interupted the party. "You guys comming or not?" Carrie heard him ask. She quickly pulled away from James, who did the same. "Yeah we're comming. Hold your horses."
***
Carrie and James followed Brendan to the crater and the three of them climbed down inside. What they now saw looked like a giant meteor. "Whoa, what is this thing?" Brendan asked in amazement.
"I believe it is a meteor, if I'm not mistaken." James said with a slight triumph in his voice. Brendan shot over a galnce that meant that he hated know-it-alls, and James imdeiately stopped himself from continuing.
"Well, if it is a meteor, then why did it crash land here?" Carrie asked, hoping to find some answers. The three of them began to walk closer to the meteor, with Brendan leading the way. Once they were within touch of it, they stopped. Brendan put his hand out as if to touch the meteor. "I wouldn't do that if i were you." Carrie cautioned.
"And why not? What are you afraid is gonna happen?" With that note he touched it, and then jumped back as if in pain. "Owww!" Brendan screamed as he jumped up and down shaking his hand.
James walked over to Brendan. "Dude, are you alright?"
Brendan then let a smile creep across his face and at once they both realized that he was faking the whole thing. "You guys should have seen the looks on your faces. They were priceless." Brendan exclaimed as he began to chuckle a bit.
"It's not funny." Carrie said in disgust. "You could have seriously been hurt."
"But I'm not ok? Everything's fine." Brendan said in assurance. What he didn't know was that by touching the meteor it awoke the Master an alien being trapped inside of the meteor for centuries. The Master escaped from the back of the meteor, slithering in the slimy goo it comprised off out of sight. "This is boring. I don't know about you guys, but i'm going home." Brendan said as he exited the crater. James and Carrie soon followed. "And this doesn't leave the three of us, got it?" Brendan threatened.
"Got ya. Doesn't leave us." Carrie said as they walked away. What they failed to notice was a pair of eyes watching them from the distance, studying them.
-End of Part 1-
Angel Ranger
04-01-2008, 11:59 PM
Nice start, I really like the last line. Can't wait to see more. One thing I would suggest is don't swear in your posts as the staff won't like that, just replace it something like *&*&%$%** ect. On a writers note it was well written, but one thing bugs me
The two were about to kiss
That was a bit sudden lol
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