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-DMS-
03-06-2008, 12:17 AM
go to www.stumpfproductions.com and check out PR Raptor Force the ultimate fanfic!

Pumpy
03-06-2008, 03:46 AM
When are you going to post the actual fanfic?

-DMS-
03-06-2008, 03:56 AM
by the weekend at least the first part. the logo was created and posted

-DMS-
03-09-2008, 04:56 PM
Dr. Oliver was loaded with tons of work and he didn’t know if he would be able to do it all. Although, ever since the Power Rangers Dino Thunder team had defeated Mesagog, he had plenty of time on his hands, but usually just went home and tried to relax or go to Hailey’s Cyberspace and get an iced tea or two. Life as a power ranger had changed Dr. Oliver’s life forever. It would never be the same because he saw everything, defeated all the different monsters, and helped so many different people out along the way, but it wasn’t enough. He needed more, he wanted more. Dr. Oliver thought at first that he needed a break from all the excitement of becoming a ranger, so he became a teacher. Now, he realizes that being a ranger meant everything to him. Dr. Oliver was gathering up his stuff from his classroom at Reefside High School, and than slowly, but surely the ground started to shake more and more rapidly. Dr. Oliver was very confused. Connor McKnight came running into the classroom, trying to stay on his feet. He shouts, “Come on Dr. O, we need to get out of here!”

http://www.stumpfproductions.com/prraptorforce.htm for the rest of the story (ALOT MORE)

-DMS-
03-10-2008, 08:28 PM
Power Rangers Raptor Force



Episode 1: The Lost Island Part I



Dr. Oliver was loaded with tons of work and he didn’t know if he would be able to do it all. Although, ever since the Power Rangers Dino Thunder team had defeated Mesagog, he had plenty of time on his hands, but usually just went home and tried to relax or go to Hailey’s Cyberspace and get an iced tea or two. Life as a power ranger had changed Dr. Oliver’s life forever. It would never be the same because he saw everything, defeated all the different monsters, and helped so many different people out along the way, but it wasn’t enough. He needed more, he wanted more. Dr. Oliver thought at first that he needed a break from all the excitement of becoming a ranger, so he became a teacher. Now, he realizes that being a ranger meant everything to him. Dr. Oliver was gathering up his stuff from his classroom at Reefside High School, and than slowly, but surely the ground started to shake more and more rapidly. Dr. Oliver was very confused. Connor McKnight came running into the classroom, trying to stay on his feet. He shouts, “Come on Dr. O, we need to get out of here!”

“Were are the others?” Dr. O shouts back.

“I don’t know, I think they went home already”

“Okay, hurry Connor lets get out of here quick!”

All of a sudden one of the huge pipes from the ceiling collapses right in front of Dr. O and Connor. “Whoa that was close!” exclaimed Connor.

“Connor try to stay focused, this is serious, and we don’t know what’s going on so try to stay focused, remember what I told you in the past when we were rangers. You have to stay focused!”

“Right, sorry Dr. O.”

“Its okay Connor, lets not worry about this now, lets just try to get out of here.”

Dr. O and Connor climbed over the pipe and went out the classroom door. With a blink of an eye, a red trail of vapor came out of nowhere, and Shane, the red wind ninja ranger came and grabbed Dr. O and Connor and used his ninja speed to get them out of the school.

“Shane, what are you doing here?” asked Connor?

“These earthquakes have been happening all around the world, and I was going to see if you knew what was going on, but the way it seems, you don’t have a better idea than I do,” said Shane.

“Sorry Shane, we don’t, but you said they’re happening all over the world?” asked Dr. O.

“Yes, that’s right Dr. Oliver, Cam has been tracking what’s left of the Wind Ninja Academy.”

“What do you mean Shane,” asks Dr. O, while Connor stares blankly at the two having the conversation.

“From one of the earthquakes, it destroyed most of the Academy, the underground base is all that is left, but Cam was telling me he has no idea why these earthquakes are occurring, but he thinks that there might me a new evil and that it might be the biggest and most fearsome villain we have ever faced. The only problem is that since we don’t have our ranger powers anymore we might not the power to fight against it.”

“I see what you’re saying Shane, but I got some good news. Connor I haven’t told you this yet, but Hailey and I have been doing some experimental tests, to take the Dino gems power and transfer it into new morphers.”

“Whoa! Dr. O, how come you didn’t tell me about it, this is big news,” blurted Connor.

“Well with Kira, in her music career, and Ethan in his computer business there isn’t really anyone to tell, but you, and we didn’t want to tell you anything because you might get your hopes up, and if it didn’t work, we didn’t want to disappoint you.”

“I understand Dr. O, but how are the experiments going?”

“It’s actually going great; Hailey and I think we might actually almost have it!”

“That’s awesome, but back to the real problem, the ground if you haven’t noticed is still shaking.”

A brick house went flying from a tornado that came out of nowhere. Now there were several tornados and still earthquakes, and everything was all over the place. Dr. O, Connor, and Shane had to think of a way to get out of there fast and get to a place where it was safe and dry, and didn’t have all these natural disasters going on.

“I know a place,” said a teenager, coming up to the three. This teenager was a student of Dr. O’s, who is only a sophomore. He is about Dr. O’s height and is very bright for his age, and is excellent with computers. This teenager also trained under Dr. O in martial arts and is extremely skilled and talented at it.

“Doug what are you doing here?” asked Connor.

“Hey I know you guys are rangers, no I wasn’t listening into your conversation, well I was, but that’s not the point. Dr. O as you know I am really good with computers, so I kinda hacked into your mainframe at your house and I find the bio and saw everything that went on when Mesagog was around.”

“Does anyone else know about our secret?” asked Dr. O.

“No just me and David, Cassidy, and her friend. Don’t worry though your secret is safe with me.”

As they were talking David, out of breath comes running to them and puts his hand on his knees, gasping for air.

“Dang Doug, what have I said about running that fast, you know I can’t keep up with you. Hey Dr. O, hey Connor, Shane,” said David panting.

“Hello David,” said Dr. O, Connor, and Shane together.

“Anyways, Doug, what do you mean you know a place?” questioned Dr. O.

“We need to go to the shore, the beach, there is a boat, and my dad is meeting us there. We get on the boat and motor ourselves to this island. Now this island I named, it unknown and isn’t on any maps. There we will be safe. For some reason in that small area, nothing is going on, but as Shane said everywhere else there are hurricanes, earthquakes, and tornadoes happening all around the world,” said Doug quickly.

BOOM! A pillar from a building fell onto the ground right beside them, and the tornado was getting closer.

“We got to get out of here fast, lets go Shane can you use your super speed and get us to that boat!?” asked Dr. O, in a rush.

“Yeah, everybody hold on!” shouted Shane.

Whoosh! They were gone. Going through the wind and tornadoes faster than the speed of light, faster than a blink of an eye, faster than anything you can image. Stop! Freeze! Everything is still. They were there. They were at the beach. Watching everything going around them. Everyone could not believe what was going on. It seemed the whole world was going down the drain, but by natural disasters all around the world.

“Hello, guys nice to watch everything, but we really need to go. Hello guys, snap back to reality, come on!” Shouts Doug’s Dad in anger. “We need to get moving ASAP!”

Everyone finally realizes they were spacing out and they run to the boat. The boat was fairly large and on it they met up with Hailey, Connor’s and David’s Parents, along with Doug’s mother, and Shane’s parents also. They quickly got on the boat and they Doug’s dad turned it on, wait no, it wasn’t starting, but Doug’s dad kept trying. Room-room, they got it to start and Doug’s dad, stepped on the petal and the boat went flying.

“Everyone okay?” asked Dr. O.

“Yup, were all good,” answered Doug for everyone.

It took a while to get to the island, with the many tornadoes, and hurricanes and tsunamis, but they got there in one piece and they were all tired. Everyone had a long day. On the island there was a gigantic house. Doug’s parents had it built in case of emergencies, especially like this, but what they couldn’t understand is why nothing came close to this island, but they didn’t mind as long as they had a place to stay, think, and be dry from everything that is going on. Dr. O led the group into Doug’s house. The parents went one way, and Dr. O, Hailey, Shane, Connor, David, and Doug went the other. Doug showed Dr. O and Hailey his computer monitor room. It has tons, and tons of computer screens, monitoring the city and everything was going on.

“Doug where did you get the money for all this stuff. This is like millions of dollars in technology and it is way better than what our base has ever had?” asked Dr. O in a shocking manor.

“My dads job, he got promoted to the head of the company and he ran it very well and than he had many, many deals all around the world and has become one of the top business markets in the world, but that’s all I know, I don’t really know anything else besides that and now he makes a lot of money, and he finally recognized that I was good with computer and he knew about the rangers and the many things that have happened around California and around the world so he got all this equipment for me and in case this ever happened.”

“Oh wow well, thank goodness for your dad or we would be able to see the news or hack into anything. Hailey do you mind turning the TV on and see if there is any news?” Dr. O asked.

“No not at all Tommy,” said Hailey.

Hailey is a great ally to the Dino Thunder Rangers, she helped them out all the time, and she helped create new technology to help aid the rangers, but now since the rangers are no more she spends her time running her café, or trying to find a way to restore the dino gems power into new morphers, so there could be a new ranger team in case of any new villain. She walks to the TV, and turns it on backs up and sits down on the couch. They all gaze at the TV, and the TV was actually working and they watched the news.

The news lady reported, “In the next story we tell you, you will be shocked and didn’t think that this would be possible, but it is and it seems like there is a new villain. The worst of them all and is the one behind all the natural disasters, and is gathering the biggest army of mutant creatures created from a mixture of animals what this villain calls Tranilaks, to attack the world. The army cannot do anything about this because its technology is no match for what this villain has, so the army cannot do anything. Who will save us from this new villain? What will happen to the planet earth? Here is the clip one of our reporters got.

The news broadcast switches to the clip, everyone is intrigued. “Hello citizens of Earth, my name is Cortex, I am a cyborg that the US tried to make but went wrong, now with my army of robots and other cyborgs, not mutant creatures, cyborgs and robots, this world will be mine, and no one will stand it my way,” says Cortex on the screen. Cortex is a 7 foot cyborg from what we could tell, with spikes coming out of his forearms and shins, dressed in all black and red and faced completely covered in a mask, Cortex will be the toughest enemy of all time.

“Oh my god,’ said everyone in a soft low voice.

“What are we going to do Dr. O?” asked Connor.

“Honestly Connor, I don’t know, we don’t have our ranger powers what else is there to do?”

“But, we can’t give up!” Shouted Doug

They ignore him and all watch the TV as Cortex and his army of cyborgs destroys the world



To Be Continued…


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-DMS-
03-11-2008, 02:08 AM
what you guys think?

*GreenDragonRanger*
03-11-2008, 04:54 AM
i like it keep em coming:D

-DMS-
03-11-2008, 09:28 PM
thanks, part two will be done this weekend

-DMS-
03-14-2008, 12:38 AM
what you guys think?

bubblez_girly15
03-14-2008, 02:14 AM
keep it going...it sounds good...
Bubblez <3

-DMS-
03-14-2008, 02:23 AM
thanks bubblez girl next ep should be up tomorrow or sat

-DMS-
03-29-2008, 02:31 AM
thanks guys for reading episode 2 will be up tonight - sunday one of those days