SteelSpaceRanger
10-27-2008, 09:47 PM
I'm planning to do a sentai movie fic called Daikajuu Sentai Genshiranger vs Super Sentai: Advent of the Ghidoranger. Here is part of the prologue that tells of the origin of the teams sixth ranger; Ghidoranger.
Thousands of years ago Planet X was plagued by a great evil, which went by the name of King Ghidora. There was only one that could free the denizens of this once peaceful planet, that one was the legendary gold suited warrior known only as the Ghidoranger. He was relentless in his quest for justice; as he fought tirelessly for his people against an enemy of cataclysmic proportions, roughly 50 times his size. Aided by his legendary blade the Ghidostriker, like a bright light he shone and righteously cut through the chains of darkness that had a steadfast hold on the once great draconic beast King Ghidora. But for his heroic and noble deeds he would be condemned, the magnanimous champion of Planet X was made to pay the ultimate price.
In sealing the evil and taking back control of the great beast, the remnants of his power were exhausted, thus causing his life force to be extinguished. In his honour, a monument was built to make his courageous deeds known to future generations, and his legendary blade the Ghidostriker was placed in a containment matrix. His suit was also stored in a way not dissimilar to the way Ghidostriker was. The creature that was once of shadow and now of light, King Ghidora, was stored in suspended animation, so that if his master the Ghidoranger, were to ever to rise up and fight the forces of darkness and malice again, he would be able to be called in times of great peril.
Just wanted to gauge what people's opinion on my writing style is.
Thousands of years ago Planet X was plagued by a great evil, which went by the name of King Ghidora. There was only one that could free the denizens of this once peaceful planet, that one was the legendary gold suited warrior known only as the Ghidoranger. He was relentless in his quest for justice; as he fought tirelessly for his people against an enemy of cataclysmic proportions, roughly 50 times his size. Aided by his legendary blade the Ghidostriker, like a bright light he shone and righteously cut through the chains of darkness that had a steadfast hold on the once great draconic beast King Ghidora. But for his heroic and noble deeds he would be condemned, the magnanimous champion of Planet X was made to pay the ultimate price.
In sealing the evil and taking back control of the great beast, the remnants of his power were exhausted, thus causing his life force to be extinguished. In his honour, a monument was built to make his courageous deeds known to future generations, and his legendary blade the Ghidostriker was placed in a containment matrix. His suit was also stored in a way not dissimilar to the way Ghidostriker was. The creature that was once of shadow and now of light, King Ghidora, was stored in suspended animation, so that if his master the Ghidoranger, were to ever to rise up and fight the forces of darkness and malice again, he would be able to be called in times of great peril.
Just wanted to gauge what people's opinion on my writing style is.