Kanashima
10-20-2008, 04:20 AM
Right now Burst Soul! is in its planning stages but to help me know if you guys think it's good or not I'll tell the prologue and main characters.
I got the idea for Burst Soul! after watching what is my favorite sentai, Gekiranger. Some fans say I'm forging but I'm putting my best effort into it just like I do whenever I come up with an idea for a story. Lets start with the prologue now-
Prologue-
Years ago the Legendary Jyuken Academy was assembled by the great master Ryu. His brother Zaku opposed teaching students to fight for justice so with three of his greatest students, Sora- the maiden of the skies, Kairi- the king of the sea, and Riku- the beast of land, formed the Shadow Jyuken Academy and declared war on the Legendary Academy, in which in a last ditch effort Ryu sacrificed himself and gave his most gifted students each of his power. When they utilized their great masters power they become the Legendary Z- Spirits. The Z- Spirits eliminated Zaku and destroyed the Shadow Academy bringing peace throughout the world.
500 years after these events that happened, the Legendary Jyuken Academy have taught gifted young students the fighting style of Jyuken and to help them understand to fight for only justice. But there was one who's harsh past reflected on how he saw the world, his name- Hitori, and because of the darkness in his heart Hitori rebelled against the Legendary Jyuken Academy and revived the Shadow Jyuken Academy. With his dark ambitions overflowing his mind, Hitori's power grew to emence proportions which then led to the fall of the Legendary Jyuken Academy forcing them to hide underground.
With the Shadow Jyuken Academy now at large again, Hitori plans for world conquest. The power of the Legendary Z- Spirits must be called once more to challenge the Shadow Academy in a final battle to save the world. Ban, Terra, and Ken, three chosen by the Z- Spirit gems Raikujo, Kouen, and Shippu must utilize their powers to fight against Hitori and his martial arts army of the Mouretsu. Which side will come out on top? And what will the future hold for both forces? The souls of these fighters will burn to defeat each other to the point that they'll burst. This is BURST SOUL!
Please comment and tell me what you think
I got the idea for Burst Soul! after watching what is my favorite sentai, Gekiranger. Some fans say I'm forging but I'm putting my best effort into it just like I do whenever I come up with an idea for a story. Lets start with the prologue now-
Prologue-
Years ago the Legendary Jyuken Academy was assembled by the great master Ryu. His brother Zaku opposed teaching students to fight for justice so with three of his greatest students, Sora- the maiden of the skies, Kairi- the king of the sea, and Riku- the beast of land, formed the Shadow Jyuken Academy and declared war on the Legendary Academy, in which in a last ditch effort Ryu sacrificed himself and gave his most gifted students each of his power. When they utilized their great masters power they become the Legendary Z- Spirits. The Z- Spirits eliminated Zaku and destroyed the Shadow Academy bringing peace throughout the world.
500 years after these events that happened, the Legendary Jyuken Academy have taught gifted young students the fighting style of Jyuken and to help them understand to fight for only justice. But there was one who's harsh past reflected on how he saw the world, his name- Hitori, and because of the darkness in his heart Hitori rebelled against the Legendary Jyuken Academy and revived the Shadow Jyuken Academy. With his dark ambitions overflowing his mind, Hitori's power grew to emence proportions which then led to the fall of the Legendary Jyuken Academy forcing them to hide underground.
With the Shadow Jyuken Academy now at large again, Hitori plans for world conquest. The power of the Legendary Z- Spirits must be called once more to challenge the Shadow Academy in a final battle to save the world. Ban, Terra, and Ken, three chosen by the Z- Spirit gems Raikujo, Kouen, and Shippu must utilize their powers to fight against Hitori and his martial arts army of the Mouretsu. Which side will come out on top? And what will the future hold for both forces? The souls of these fighters will burn to defeat each other to the point that they'll burst. This is BURST SOUL!
Please comment and tell me what you think