View Full Version : The Legion of Super-Heroes
Deadpool
10-06-2008, 04:43 PM
Game created by Deadpool
Game Co-Run By Question and Mace
Legion of Super-Heroes created and owned by DC Comics
Alright, Here's where the discussion should take place. This is where you should look to find:
Story Updates. If and when certain events need to happen in the story, look for it here.
Cast Updates If you are accepted into the game, you will be infromed here and here only. The only mention of being accepted in the CC will be a notice to check here for updates to the cast list.
Bio Comments/Concerns. All addressed here. We will post all the concerns here or in a PM.
Chit Chat about the game. Its your guy's game too. We're just running it. Feedback both negative and positive is appreaciated. However, don't take that as free reign to try and take control of the game. We want to here your comments, but lets keep it civilized.
That should be about it. Thanks guys!
Skeleman
10-06-2008, 06:31 PM
Are there any Legionnaires other than Cosmic Boy, Saturn Girl, and Lightning Lad (and of course the two bios you've already posted) off limits?
Deadpool
10-06-2008, 06:33 PM
Yes. Bouncing Boy and Dream Girl. Are off Limits since they are Mace and Question's characters from the previous incarnation of this game.
Deadpool
10-14-2008, 07:17 PM
Alright, so we've come to some decisions!
Skeleman: Welcome to the Legion! The three of us feel that you will fit in well with what we've got going on.
Akumaranger (sorry for not putting the whole name, but I can't remember how to spell the whole thing): I like it. It's good. However, it doesn't much fit in with what I'd like to do here. Perhaps if you edit in a bit of memory loss it would be helpful, because Mordru and the Dominators are possibilities that I'm kicking around. Also, I want to limit a lot of connection between this time and the standard DCU time.
DanAbare86: Unfortunately neither of your bios is accepted. The first one because I'm not allowing any Superman characters in, as well as another rule where no new versions of old characters are allowed. The second bio because it feels like Dark Knight isn't the kind of figure that would be allowed in the legion. Brain Control or not, some one like that wouldn't make it. Also, in your bio you assume that you just join the legion. Not the case. As stated in the story, each member of the legion is being invited by Brainiac 5. The sheer mass of typos and plotholes in your story also turn me off from them. I'm not saying this to be mean, I'm just trying to give you some notes. If you can make a bio that meets the criteria a little better, I would be more than happy to consider it.
danabare86
10-14-2008, 07:30 PM
I understand why did not make in. I did say he broke the brain control device in the figth. The reason why i dicide a super becuase i am reading a book. It is cllaed the last days of krypton.
Deadpool
10-20-2008, 02:44 AM
Posted a bio.. *Cough*
Yeah, sorry about not getting back to you sooner, I'm gonna be sending you a PM with something I wanna try with your character.
Not a prpblem and I'll be waiting..
Andros's_Fan
10-23-2008, 04:00 AM
Suppose I will follow Zero's lead and say..... *cough* posted a bio. :D hee hee
Deadpool
10-23-2008, 06:55 PM
Suppose I will follow Zero's lead and say..... *cough* posted a bio. :D hee hee
okay, not bad. Just a couple things I need you to change. The first thing is where you mention you're mother is the UP president. I actually have a different president for the UP. However, if you would like to just change it to former president or vice-president, it would be fine. Also, under crushes, don't say according to sites Ultra Boy. Because 1) its your choice. You don't need to have a crush on Ultra Boy just because Phantom girl has had a crush on him in the comics. This is your version of the character. and 2) It makes me think that you are just basing it on what you read online and not on your own ideas for the character.
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