Crisis: The DT

[Tempest]

Hey everybody. This is the dicussion thread for my fanfic Crisis: An SPD Rewrite, which can be found here: CLICK (http://rangertalk.com/showthread.php?p=1208#post1208)

Since this is my first fanfic EVER, constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Anyway, thanks!

[mbozzo]

I like the story, so far. When will Jack and Z become members of B Squad, or will they, in this story?